சரண்யா ஹேமாவின் கொள்ளை நிலா - 8

[Aarudhra]

 

[Durga Elango]

Mech ne machine illa da

 

[Seetha]

Sema episode... thikku thikku nu irundhuchu ennaku

 

[Sivaguru]

இந்த love a epo Surya realize panna porano

 

[Sharmila Natarajan]

Your stories are nice. But a very honest suggestion: You get too much into details of what happens every minute... romba short-aa solla vendiyadha rombaaaa izhukkura maadhiri oru feel. In dha episode la, pathirikkai kaaranga vandhaanga, galatta panninaanga, Surya kudumbam avangala samalichanga apdindradha romba minute details la izhutha maathiri irundhadhu... Indha maadhiri neraiya murai feel panni irukken. It actually brings down the interest of reading further. Every minute nadakkaradhu ellam ivlo detailed aa ezhudhanumnu avasiyamillai apdinnu thonudhu... indhu ennoda opinion. Neraiyya perukku idhula udanpaadu illama irukkalam.. aana naan enna feel panrennu sollanumnu thonuchu... sollitten..

 

[Chanmaa]

அருமையான பதிவு

 

[MalarvizhiSaravanan]

Very nice

 

[Vithusanth M]

 

[Senmozhi]

அழகிய பதிவு

 

[Harinidilip]

Nice ud