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மயூரநாதம் said:
அன்பு நட்பூக்களே,

படிக்கும் அனைவருக்கும் என் மனமார்ந்த நன்றிகள்.


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மயூரநாதம் - 32
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I am yet to read the epi fully... Somehow, I feel, you suddenly changed track after 20 episodes and started moving in rapid speed. Your writing had a mix of Ambi,Anniyan,Remo in every epi but Anniyan athikam became more... You were taking the story so fast as if someone is chasing you. I guess it was a story written long back. While reading coffee shop episode and adhi's cunningness, I thought of telling you not to take the story in the direction of coffee day owner as I couldn't digest maha committing suicide .. but at last you did it the same way may be he will come rejuvenated after 14 years.. I don't know what more you have in store with you... Your story was a real soothing one like a family movie in the beginning but suddenly you made it Commercial movie with villain, masala etc. No doubt your writing is good... But mayura natham has become mayura naasam as far as I am concerned. As a writer you may win but as a soft hearted female.... Why this kolaveri??? I am typing it in english as my words may be strong in tamil if I vent out my feelings. I really thought of stopping it in the middle. But somehow I thought you will do justice to Maalavi and maha and I continue to read. I am sorry your writing has hurt me badly, but that's a pride to your style .. take it like that and be happy but I am not at all not at all happy
மழைல குடை நனையுதேனு ஃபீல் பண்ணற ஆளு நான்... Just imagine how much I would have got stressed reading this ஆதி அராஜகம் ..
 
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